First Week Writing

First week assignment (Rough Draft)

First week assignment (Final Draft)

When I look at my first week writing assignment in comparison to the papers I’ve written for ENG 110, what I notice is that I don’t have a conclusion. I can’t remember if that was on purpose, or I just didn’t have time, but nonetheless, it’s not there. Other than that, I’m impressed with my ability to stick to my argument, and overall I felt that it was very structured and followed the things I typically do well in papers. I don’t think it stands out as something head and shoulders above all of my other writing, but I think it’s a solid paper that I’m pretty proud of